Both of the pieces are really cool. I think putting eyeball and combining with the language is really cool. Also the repetition, I guess, of the eyes and the same letter in the first image. It's similar to my concentration; pattern. The first image some how gives the illusion to the viewers, as you look at the image it pulls you into the image. On the other hand, I think you could make the color transition better in the first image. Unlike the second image, I think the first image's color transition is really rough looking. Also, I don't get the square thingy in the first eye... And may be the language in the second image could be bit bitter, more visible.
Both of the pieces are really cool. I think putting eyeball and combining with the language is really cool. Also the repetition, I guess, of the eyes and the same letter in the first image. It's similar to my concentration; pattern. The first image some how gives the illusion to the viewers, as you look at the image it pulls you into the image.
ReplyDeleteOn the other hand, I think you could make the color transition better in the first image. Unlike the second image, I think the first image's color transition is really rough looking. Also, I don't get the square thingy in the first eye... And may be the language in the second image could be bit bitter, more visible.